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Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 12:14 pm
by Wolf
Gday, I am building a site for my writings and cannot decide on the format for the Home Page.
I can keep it simple, like this...
Screen Shot 2018-01-16 at 11.59.16 am.png
Or make it more 'magazine-style' like this...
https://wol223.wixsite.com/sasquatchsagas
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Which one makes you want to read more?
Thanks in advance.
Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 12:44 pm
by Simon M
I can't see the link to the first presentation style, but that magazine layout looks excellent to me.

Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 12:55 pm
by Wolf
Thanks SImon, that's one vote for magazine style layout.
For some reason I cannot link the first option. The text is pretty much the same as in the linked page (second option).
My son reckons its all too 'old school'.
Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 1:02 pm
by ChrisV
I think the second example looks best. Its a little more exciting .
Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 2:14 pm
by Dion
Hey Wolf
I dont see much difference other than the second one has a few more pictures, for a 'Home page' this is precisely what you would want to draw the eye in and get peoples attention.
The second layout is fine and is probably what I would choose, I would just smarten it up a bit make it a bit cleaner like the first one.
Hope that makes sense.
Either way good luck.
Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 2:45 pm
by Searcher
The magazine style is definitely more attention grabbing. It holds more interest. Look forward to seeing it up and running!
Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 3:16 pm
by Rusty2
Oooh , the second one looks better for some reason , good luck with it Wolf !
Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 3:46 pm
by paulmcleod67
Wolf wrote:Gday, I am building a site for my writings and cannot decide on the format for the Home Page.
I can keep it simple, like this...
Screen Shot 2018-01-16 at 11.59.16 am.png
Or make it more 'magazine-style' like this...
https://wol223.wixsite.com/sasquatchsagas
Screen Shot 2018-01-16 at 12.07.29 pm.png
Which one makes you want to read more?
Thanks in advance.
Option A mate looks more inviting.
Where and when can I buy the book.....gimme gimme gimme.
Cudo's matey
Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 4:34 pm
by Yowie bait
I like the top one best. The first book was excellent.

Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 7:28 pm
by Shazzoir
They are both good, but the first option presents a 'wall of text' which will deter some people from going further and reading what you have to say.
The second option is MUCH easier on the eye, it also breaks up the 'wall' of text into bite-sized paragraphs, which is what you want. It looks less intimidating to read, forces/persuades the eye to move across the page, which as others have already stated, brings interest and energy to the page and its contents.
Variety of image then text is what I would suggest works best, just be wary of making the text too small. What you have there already looks fine, but I wouldn't go any smaller.
Similarly, it's always good to avoid using too many different fonts - One is fine, two is acceptable. Any more than two is pushing it, but you can sometimes get away with using italics for interest, rather than a third font.
Don't go for big splashy fonts in multiple colours - stick to a colour scheme, as you have done. White always wins on a dark bacground, just make sure if you put text over paler images, that you may need to use black rather than white.
Excellent work Wolf.
Shazz
Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 7:43 pm
by Doorway
I like the 2nd one Wolf.
Good luck with it.
Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 8:37 pm
by Wolf
Dion wrote:... I would just smarten it up a bit make it a bit cleaner like the first one.
Hope that makes sense...
Yeah, it's a work in progress.
Thanks everyone for your input

Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 8:41 pm
by Wolf
I've been having fun animating the page elements...
https://wol223.wixsite.com/sasquatchsag ... creek-1967
What do you guys think?
Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 11:20 pm
by Simon M
That's really good!
Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2018 12:45 pm
by David
Number 2 Wolf.. I think photos breaking up the content on websites is far more interesting than block text. Just looks more appealing and makes you want to read the accompanying text. Good luck.
Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2018 1:25 pm
by Wolf
Thanks everyone, I will go with the magazine-look approach.
I have used it for one of the 'sasquatch science articles too...
https://wol223.wixsite.com/sasquatchsag ... kull-found
Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2018 2:33 pm
by hillbilly
Shazzoir wrote:They are both good, but the first option presents a 'wall of text' which will deter some people from going further and reading what you have to say.
The second option is MUCH easier on the eye, it also breaks up the 'wall' of text into bite-sized paragraphs, which is what you want. It looks less intimidating to read, forces/persuades the eye to move across the page, which as others have already stated, brings interest and energy to the page and its contents.
Variety of image then text is what I would suggest works best, just be wary of making the text too small. What you have there already looks fine, but I wouldn't go any smaller.
Similarly, it's always good to avoid using too many different fonts - One is fine, two is acceptable. Any more than two is pushing it, but you can sometimes get away with using italics for interest, rather than a third font.
Don't go for big splashy fonts in multiple colours - stick to a colour scheme, as you have done. White always wins on a dark bacground, just make sure if you put text over paler images, that you may need to use black rather than white.
Excellent work Wolf.
Shazz
Yes, ...all good points.
What she said, well done Wolf.
Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2018 4:31 pm
by Austral
Kow Swamp is near Leitchville, Victoria and the skulls were found in the 1970's .
Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2018 11:37 pm
by Wolf
Austral wrote:
Kow Swamp is near Leitchville, Victoria and the skulls were found in the 1970's .
Thanks mate.
Your comment made me do some more research... Apparently the Pintubi1 skull was found in the Lower Darling River NSW, not Kow swamp as other resources suggested.
Re: Opinions/critiques wanted please...
Posted: Thu Jan 18, 2018 6:55 am
by Austral
Yeah, me and the old man went for a look when they dug them up and they'd been buried and not just died there.
A local farmer brought one of the skulls to school for us kids to look at and that one had over sized canines and heavy brow.
Years later i saw pictures of the Kow Swamp skulls at a museum and they weren't the same skulls.
Also, the Aboriginies from Echuca claimed them as there assentors and took them somewhere ?